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The Mangini Chronicles Vol I
Author: arno strine
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(Added on Jun 29, 2006)
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This is the first volume of what I hope to be many about High School Head Master, Eric Mangini. In this volume Eric begins the manifestation of his dark desires by entrapping and blackmailing a student into sexual slavery and humiliation. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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The problem with most blackmail stories, is that the blackmailer usually goes skating on thin ice by acting on impulse. Impulsive blackmails usually don't last long as the blackmailer becomes too self-assured and misses yonder curve which makes him skate right into that huge cement block that indicates a sewer outlet.
I know that it's fiction, and that the author needs a starting point and I also know that once beyond that starting point, the shaky foundations of the blackmail don't play a role any longer.
Except that the author usually keeps coming-up with fresh thin ice for the blackmailer to skate on, in the form of new to be blackmailed goils...
Anyway; like I said, this is fiction, so I'll close my eyes for the thin ice and skate along, regardless of the fact that I weigh in at 110 kilo (about 250 pounds). Until now, the ice holds.
JJ (9/10)
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DeGrinch
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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Your doing very well here, keep up the good work. I do hope that the next chapters will be a little quicker in coming. (8/10)
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Yaps
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Sep 4, 2006 |
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Very nice buildup of the story, love the attention to details.
The point of view is sometimes a little confusing as feelings and thoughts of both first and third person perspective are shown but more than makes up for it in eroticism.
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- Replied by:
arno strine
(Edit) (Nov 10, 2006)
- shit, you're right about the 1st/3rd person switch. I think I wanna write this from the 3rd person point of view....so I have a lot of editing to do...that's why it's been taking forever to post a new chapter...BUT THANKS FOR THE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!
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chksng19
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Aug 27, 2006 |
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An outstanding, literate, and well-presented tale. What in other hands might be "the same old thing" has a fresh exciting beginning. Anxious and excited to see more of the same! (10/10)
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mike uk reader
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Jul 1, 2006 |
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The best written story start on this site in weeks and this is the authors first atempt erotica at it's very best. Looking out for much, much more from you "arno" (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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if the rest sdtays like this first part, you have a real hot story, keep it up (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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good start to what could be avery entertainig series. Could have been longer. My gf will loveit if thier is plenty of forced public exhibition and humiliation. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
arno strine
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2006)
- thanks m8! Tell your GF to hang tight, it's coming. Just very slowly. It's been very hard to find time l8ly but hopefully will get a few more chapters going soon. This is the first story i've ever written (erotic or otherwise).....
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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Very well written story. Very promising start. Can't wait to read the next volume. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
arno strine
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2006)
- i can't w8 to write the next volume. thx for the positive feedback. I'lll try to have a new round up by July's enbd at l8st.
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Mr. Pete
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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This is a very well-told story with careful attention to the details of the victim's ensnarement. One very minor suggestion is to actually label the chapters with numbers along with their titles. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
arno strine
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2006)
- thanks for the encouraging review! This is my first ever story/post so i was a little confused i.e. formatting and whatnot. I'll try and fix the numbers going forward for sure!!
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