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The Subjugation of Scully
Author: Harold Sheep
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(Added on Jul 5, 2006)
(This month 123183 readers) (Total 211265 readers) |
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FBI Special Agent Dana Scully is captured and trained as a sex slave |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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Sojurboy
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Nov 8, 2010 |
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This author has progressed from obscurity to fame with one story, or at least he should. His first story is a total winner, well written with an insightful, and intricate plot. Very believable! I will be following the ongoing saga, and looking for anything else Harold writes. Keep up the superb work. (10/10)
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Bummenphist
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Jun 3, 2008 |
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Well written, descriptive and image provoking, but also giving some idea of what is going through the minds of those involved. The anticipation of a new chapter always adds to the enjoyment, wondering how this will be tied up, so to speak. (9/10)
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Stealth694
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Apr 17, 2008 |
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I have really enjoyed this story and am waiting for the Next installment. Tempo is smooth and the slow wearing of scully's identity is really entriging More soon Please (9/10)
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allythemaid
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Jan 23, 2008 |
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Really enjoyed the hopelessness as Scully lost control (9/10)
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mirage
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Oct 21, 2007 |
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good story. The first few parts was easy to read then the later parts, some of the sexual scenes got a bit long winded, I skip most of that. (8/10)
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Clevernick
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May 17, 2007 |
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Well-thought out and a good read!
Chief failing is a frequent recurrence of hackneyed phrases (cliches such as "wanton female flesh") that don't really even work the first time. I think this comes partly from a need to describe everything a bit too often.
A sneer need not always be a "sadistic sneer". Let the words and actions of the characters speak for themselves more often and you won't have to keep thinking up different ways to describe them!
Save your descriptions for the surroundings, and for people's reactions when they're in question or unexpected, or need to be described for dramatic value. You'll be able to relax and write what's happening and what people are thinking. And the story will flow better.
Nice work, Harold The Clever Sheep. Hope to find out what Rusty must do to earn her next orgasm.
(8/10)
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slutsteph
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Aug 18, 2006 |
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girl is beginning to really enjoy the story. It started slow, but the action is getting really juicey now! (9/10)
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woolfighter
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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It's wonderful. Magnificent, terrific. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Harold Sheep
(Edit) (Aug 4, 2006)
- An author speaks: Thanks for the kind words, guys (my first 10/10s!) - exactly what it takes to keep me going. I am currently planning for 'Scully' to be a 15 part story, give or take a couple of episodes, and am doggedly churning out one episode a week at present, which should see our tale of woe concluding sometime in early October. Thanks again for the reviews, you'd be surprised how much they mean to a new author.
Regards
H
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sunburststrat
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Jul 31, 2006 |
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Very well done! I love the pace and the action (especially the f/f stuff) and her inner turmoil and well, just about everything about it. More, give us more! (9/10)
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robyn
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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hope you will write more (10/10)
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RhondaLee
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Jul 17, 2006 |
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A "pain device" without the detail description as to its pain effect, is too plain. The aftermath description of what that device does is too short and not enough details.
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castle2001
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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This is a good beginning. Can develop in many directions, almost all strokable. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Harold Sheep
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2006)
- Thanks for the feedback guys. I have sent three more chapters to the webmaster, although for some reason it seems to take several days for a story to be posted. When the latest chapters are uploaded, however, then hopefully you will all be getting the 'action' you crave! And thanks again for taking the time to review my (very first!) story.
H
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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Poor Scully!!! A good start to your story. I can't wait to read more. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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not a bad start, hope to see more soon, then i will adjust my review accordingly (6/10)
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DomMaster
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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A good start - but the action needs to get started. Good use of grammer and a clean style. (6/10)
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