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Enslaved by a black teen
Author: ziggg
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(Added on Jul 25, 2006)
(This month 74734 readers) (Total 113064 readers) |
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A married man is trapped by a young black girl. |
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| Reviewer:
JerryH
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Mar 9, 2010 |
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This was a great story. It was well-written, interesting, and built to be very exciting. I think it was a bit slow in starting out, but improved considerably. I loved the two scenes with the dog and would have liked more description there. I hope ziggg continues the story at some point. (8/10)
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azrlg17
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Oct 4, 2008 |
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I like the F/m parts of the story, but it should have stayed between the girls and Mike. The risk of bringing others in is just too big.
Also the blackmail part is weak. I mean he ranted a bit about his wife. So what? Would she really leave him for that?
And as in most blackmail stories there was no real effort to fight back (maybe entrap the sisters on tape for rape) or even a real effort to negotiate. Even if he e.g. refuses to service King (and why didn't he take the stupid whip away from them) the girls the girls still loose a slave who is willing to do other things if the tell on him.
(6/10)
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Mad Lews
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Aug 10, 2007 |
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While not my cup of tea, the story was well written and reasonably plotted. Extreme enough for most anyone here. It just needs an ending. Were you planning on that? (8/10)
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jamb
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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I really liked this. It's shocking and yet a real turn-on - especially the way the punishments get worse and worse, and the way the girls break that man's spirit. Can't wait for a next part. (8/10)
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themaneloco
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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The girls were a little young for my liking but the story was good regardless. Could I suggest that you update the story codes to include M/m though as I was expecting only F/m? (7/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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nicely done not to much shock value but enough to keep the reader wanting to read more (9/10)
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callofthewild
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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absolutely brilliant story and it makes me a compelete fan of the authour i would have appreciated if the characters were 18+ (10/10)
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Wistan
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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Good story, the theme of a reluctant man enslaved by a woman is one of my favourites. It's always difficult to construct a plausible way for a woman to manage this in this day and age, but the blackmail idea is a good one. I like that the author took the time to show how the guy got more and more into it.
The age thing doesn't bother me much, but I agree that it would be a bit more acceptable if the girls were older. Not much was made of the fact that they were so young, so why not make them 17/18 or more? It doesn't seem like the story would lose anything from it and it might appeal to a larger audience that way. (7/10)
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Michislave
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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This story offers more in writing skills than the typical internet junk. The femdomme was not inherently evil, and the man reluctantly agreed to do as he was told. I am not for using kids in such things, and they could have been older, but overall, a darned good story. (9/10)
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