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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 6, 2006 |
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An interesting storyline, demonstrating that sexual awakening happens sooner than lots of parents are willing to admit. As I well remember, from both sides. LOL
The last bit is sweet, but a little rushed. Does a nice job of wrapping things up, though. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Nice tender story. Can be real as children play more sexual games as some people think! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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A good story for an old man. It brings back pleasant memories of youth and exploration. It is pleasant to sith back and remember my eighth grade sweetheart, Helene................................I recommend this story; especially if you are over 65. Lee. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Started out very well, good voice and quality -- very sexy, moved along well, and introduced good conflict (propriety v. sensuality). I felt the ending was very abrupt and disjointed, however; a different time, voice, mood, and content that it would have been better without. Stick to what your story is about!
I'd also love to hear more in-depth descriptions; show more and narrate a bit less.
I hope you continue with this -- it shows a lot of promise and it would be great to have the conflict resolved.
As mentioned, codes would be nice and a smidge more of a synopsis would be helpful (although not really critical, the first paragraph pretty much lays it all out). (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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you need a decent synposis and you need codes (5/10)
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