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Breakthru
Author: primal angel
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(Added on Sep 5, 2006)
(This month 48524 readers) (Total 53598 readers) |
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A couple experience a breaktru in her submission to him one evening during a training session. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
scribe
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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Professional grade! Thoroughly believable, well-paced, and hot slice-of-life, with a sweet and satisfying resolution. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Sep 6, 2006 |
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Very hot. All the emotions are there and explored fully. Good job. (9/10)
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