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Lessons Learned
Author: slave Debbie
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(Added on Sep 15, 2006)
(This month 48520 readers) (Total 58208 readers) |
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Debbie is harshly punished for not taking proper care of her Master\'s property and for disobeying a direct order from her Mistress. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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great start, can't wait for more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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What a great twist at the end! I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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Obedience was wonderfully portrayed, in this well written submission, by an experienced slave. In terms of descriptive literary expression, I found your 'diary' to avoid the main point of the story.
Humiliation could have been increased had your subsequent punishment been made public, such as by inviting like minded masochists to witness, or even participate in your pain?
A worthy effort, nonetheless.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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Very well done ----I enjoyed it (9/10)
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