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The Mortgage
Author: Marlissa
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(Added on Sep 1, 2001)
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The Mortgage is a ten part story about how an older man manipulates a young newlywed wife into becoming first his secretary and eventually his personal sexual plaything, both on and off-the-job. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
illk9
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Aug 16, 2012 |
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I wish the sex was written with more detail, but an exciting read none the less. Great story line!! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Something I read quite a while back, "The Mortgage" is among Marlissa's better work.
And although the author is eager to point out that a lot of this story is Parker's doing, or at least the editing and a lot of suggestions, I still feel that Marlissa shouldn't try to minimalize her efforts. i've read a few of her other stories and can judge to the fact she's a very good author.
"The Mortgage" is a bit of a 'standard' blackmail story, but one which stands out thanks to the excellent portrayeal of the different characters --especially that of Amy, the main (unwilling) participant.
Great story.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 26, 2004 |
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loved everything about it, i remember reading it sometime back and it is still as good now as it was then
my only complaint, be it small is the clothes she was forced to wear, whish the colors were different, too many story with short skirts, hot pants and the colors please (10/10)
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merrymonk
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Sep 8, 2001 |
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great read, well developed.the ending begs for a sequel,could we dare hope. (9/10)
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ownedgirl
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Sep 6, 2001 |
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well written and believable, the author seemed to make the main characters come alive, and the reader was able to get inside the heads of the characters which is sadly not the case for most stories. the author also has a good sense for humiliation (8/10)
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hyphen666
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Sep 3, 2001 |
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Well written with a good plot structure. The characters are more than the usual cartoon figures that normally people such stories. The ending is outstanding and obviously influenced by Parker, the master of the unhappy ending. Worth the time to read. (8/10)
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