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Jizzer of Aahs
Author: R. E. Lavaque
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(Added on Dec 17, 2006)
(This month 75934 readers) (Total 93745 readers) |
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A parody of a story that we all know. |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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There are not too many GOOD parodies out there, and this one of them. The second chapter seemed more polished to me; the first had some careless errors. The author isn't making the mistake of trying too hard to match the original exactly, and we're getting a good feel for how Dorothy feels about her situation. One note: When you're looking for directions to the Rhinestone City, it's TomTom, not Soso.
Edit: Just finished, and damn! Did not expect that. Good work all the way around. For those who think it's too slow, the sex gets better in the later chapters. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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was ok, to many paradies out there however (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
cala
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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The ruby dildo of the Wicked Bitch of East LA? LMAO!! (8/10)
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