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Author: Penny
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(Added on Jan 5, 2007)
(This month 33241 readers) (Total 61990 readers) |
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A week away as a special treat for a sub turns into a learning curve for a reluctant dom |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
koppite727
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Apr 2, 2007 |
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great story, 9 only because a 10 is impossible. great job and hope to see more!!! (9/10)
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kinkytoy
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Jan 31, 2007 |
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i loved it. it pulled me in by the frist min i read it i cant wait for the nex part (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Jan 12, 2007 |
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Well written (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sallyannslut
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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i have enjoyed your story very much. i hope there will be more comming in the future. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
pennytied
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2007)
- I am glad you enjoyed my story. I am planning to continue the story and will be submitting new update soon
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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The idea of the story was well-done, but there were too many run-on sentences and misuse of words. But overall I did like it. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
pennytied
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2007)
- Thanks for your input. Writting is not one of my strong points but have enjoyed the experiance and hope to improve.
- Replied by:
koppite727
(Edit) (Apr 2, 2007)
- punctuation is for wussies.
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