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What a Wife
Author: Jeanie Luhe
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(Added on Jan 25, 2007)
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Unsuspecting husband finds out what his wife is really like |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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I dithered between '7' and '8', but finally decided to go high. There were a few punctuation problems (hard to tell with the way the html screwed this over), and around the middle the paragraphs just disappear. Needs more proofing, but the story itself is very hot, and the poor formatting doesn't ruin (just detracts from) reader appreciation. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Jan 26, 2007 |
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Very well written i thought! Great detail which is always a critical point with me!Well done (8/10)
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takarada
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Jan 25, 2007 |
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This must be the author named MonochromeGrey in previous posts.
Excellent consensual breast torture, I hope there is more (7/10)
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