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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Feb 10, 2009 |
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I found this story to be well written. Not shallow at all. Chloe has the right state of mind to make the decisions she makes. They may seem rushed, but they come naturally to her.
The only thing that bothered me was the Johnny Popper joining the ranks. Not because he should be out of the picture, but because of my inborn avertion towards male submissives.
Still, since overall this is high quality storytelling and my personal feelings can't detract from that, a nice niner is the outcome.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 9, 2007 |
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What a strange story...a bit shallow in places (oops, I got raped, I guess he's my Master now) and (oops, Master died, I guess I'm the Domme now), but still thoroughly readable. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Cheryl Oldroyd
(Edit) (Oct 12, 2008)
- Thanks for reviewing, the reason it turns from sub to dom theme is because I wanted to explore both sides of the psychological ideas behind pleasure from both perspectives.would just like to add, the email for me is now exbrandywitch@yahoo.co.uk, just for the record in case any readers want to review or drop me a line - but remember, Im only here to write thanks, Cheryl
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| Reviewer:
cala
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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VERY well done. Great character depth! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Cheryl Oldroyd
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2007)
- Thank you, when I begin a story I usually have an idea at its core but how it grows is one of the mysteries of what makes words into a tale! Ive found this story is constantly evolving and so are the characters, and I hope when part 3 is finished it will be equally enjoyable to read! Thank you for your comments and keep reading!
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| Reviewer:
SimonMagick
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Mar 15, 2007 |
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high marks - I believed it.
Often a story is written from the woman's perspective, and the author might even have a woman's name(and may or may not actually be female), yet I'll feel it was more of a man's fantasy. This is not the case with BBW. Though it stimulated me as a male, the female POV rang truer than most stories. She went through a believable gamut of emotions, thoughts and feelings before arriving at her submission decision.
Also, I liked the element of mystery and danger very often missing in BDSM stories. Unaswered questions about the extent of Shane's mental damage as well as what he might have done to his sister enhance the tale. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Cheryl Oldroyd
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2007)
- Thank you, yes I did weave a few threads in there to enhance his background, and the element of danger, well I try and reach deeply to enhance the true taste of the theme so the reader can breathe it!There is so much scope for this within all things erotic. Keep reading my stuff and thanks again.
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| Reviewer:
SimoneLocke
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Mar 15, 2007 |
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Oh my! I haven't seen writing this good in a long time!
I just love the flowing descriptions that fill the senses.
Keep writing! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Cheryl Oldroyd
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2007)
- Thanks for that, yes, I always write with colour because I write about things that fire the imagination and if I get fired enough I can make it scorch to the end of the page. Im very diverse, so many themes to come!
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| Reviewer:
ultimatesubbie
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Mar 13, 2007 |
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great story. Well done! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Cheryl Oldroyd
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2007)
- Glad you liked it! I'm committed to pushing boundaries in my writing, I think words are tools to paint a picture and in the realms of sex there are endless possibilities and I'm aiming to explore all avenues in my writing. Thank you for a nice review! I'm in the process of writing another one as we speak, so keep an eye out for it soon! Cheryl.
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