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My family
Author: tpesadist
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(Added on Mar 13, 2007)
(This month 69063 readers) (Total 86226 readers) |
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A story of family life under astrict father |
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Weighed
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Average
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Reviewer:
Rocky
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Mar 15, 2007 |
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It seems that English is not your native language, as there are a number of syntax errors in addition to the issues the previous reviewer mentioned. I would suggest finding someone to proofread your material before posting, as it does show promise and could be enjoyable if it were easier to read. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
daiquiri
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Mar 14, 2007 |
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Try paragraphs and sentences. (5/10)
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