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The “unwilling” Toilet Slave
Author: Mitzi Forbes
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(Added on Apr 9, 2007)
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After searching for years Mistress happens to find opportunity to blackmail a potential toilet slave and what a filthy find she turns out to be! |
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| Reviewer:
a.storm
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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Another great story. Always looking out for this author. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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Got re-aquainted with "Unwilling Toilet Slave" thanks to the addition of another chapter.
The new part shows how much progress Mitzi Forbes has made over the last 18 months, because her writing style is much less rushed, more subdued. Still, the narrative is still all-out in-yer-face, but Mitzi seems to have calmed down a bit, thought things over a tad more before writing. And it's a good thing too.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
dadthor
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Sep 26, 2008 |
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Great tale. The realistic blackmail scenario appealled to me. I just had to save it to read whenever I like. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Panther007
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Sep 24, 2008 |
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Quite enjoyable, but you kneed some work on dialoge structure as in paragraph breaks. The scat fun and fisting was very hot and I look forward to reading more. (7/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 18, 2007 |
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Very good plot but as carrieanne said the neighbor had too good of a time too fast. Maybe a little more story development. But not a bad read at all. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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I am still gagging!!! You have some typos and some paragraphing issues, but not a bad job over all. I do think the neighbor had too good of a time too fast though! But ... that just my opinion. (7/10)
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caged
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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I enjoyed this. Blackmail or any non-concensual stuff usually rings my bell, so I could have done with the victim enjoying it so much. Still, pleasingly disgusting and quite nicely written. (8/10)
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