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Rachel's Slavery Author: Raphael
(Added on May 8, 2007) (This month 48927 readers) (Total 56518 readers)
BDSM games with Rachel and her Master, Michael

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: May 12, 2007
It does not matter if you have a good idea or good content when you put your entire story in one paragraph! If you were to organize your writing properly I think this might have been a decent story, but as is ... it is too difficult to muddle through. If you reformat, I will be happy to give it another look and give another score. (2/10)

Reviewer: DeGrinch (Edit) Rating: May 9, 2007
The story, discriptions etc were quit good, although I would like to have a little more background on the characters. The worst thing is that it has no paragraphs, the whole story is bunched into one lump, making it a bit hard to read in places. (7/10)

Reviewer: Skruddgemire (Edit) Rating: May 8, 2007
Loved it, was right up my alley. This story would do well with follow-up chapters (9/10)

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