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Hangover
Author: Memento
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(Added on Mar 25, 2008)
(This month 83188 readers) (Total 115083 readers) |
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A really big night out for Lisa |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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The short 'n' hard variety. Story covers a lot of ground, torture, humiliation, piercing, tattooing... well portrayed in your face characters. Good stuff.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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nicely done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Boundtowrite
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May 19, 2008 |
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Nice to read, some very interesting ideas and it stimulates your imagination. However, it is just that bit over the edge in reality and the conversations don't read as easy as intended by the bullets.
Still worthwhile to read, and with some editing (especially giving wounds and tattoo just the time they need) it will be excellent. (8/10)
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incandescence
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May 2, 2008 |
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As always quite the pleasure reading Your stories...
;) (9/10)
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Deathnote
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Mar 30, 2008 |
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This... story... made me eternally sober... good job! ("o_o) Very nicely written, too. Didn't think bullet points instead of quotation marks would be almost as easy to read.
Hmm... that kind of vid would get flagged on youtube in less than five second... and removed within ten. There's also that your main character met the girls in a bar. I know it's just fiction, but if you ever plan to continue this story, maybe those kinds of things could factor in. Maybe the girls could come back the next morning and offer her another chance? :p (10/10)
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slut2002gyrl
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Mar 30, 2008 |
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gryl is so stoked by this story, in which almost all her fantasies are included. keep going!!!!!!! (10/10)
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subKatie69
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Mar 29, 2008 |
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great story just wish you would do more and have lisa as there slave for good (10/10)
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fellatrix
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Mar 26, 2008 |
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Wonderful. Best story i've read in ages. (10/10)
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