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Kyle Earns an A
Author: dale10
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(Added on Apr 15, 2008)
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Kyle must sexually service his teacher to pass |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Clepsidra
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May 7, 2008 |
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The story is interesting, but you could work a little more on the grammar and the format. I donīt know what happened, but all the lines are broken (I supposed some of it is to be blamed on the site, but still). And please re-read chapter two. There are at least two paragraphs that got doubled, and itīs extremely annoying.
But anyway, like I said, the story is interesting. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Gordi
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May 1, 2008 |
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I think this is one of your better ones. If you're looking for more ideas, maybe you could force Kyle to get intimate with other students that the teacher is also blackmailing. Or maybe just older, abusive gay men. Oh the possibilities... (9/10)
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emile
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Apr 28, 2008 |
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Great story, really involved and descriptive, steady development and loads of potential. Can't wait to see how things progress. Hopefully another long story.
nb One annoying thing, the text repeats a lot, think it might be a problem with the upload or text editor. Has happened on a few of your stories, might want to change word processors. But the content rocks! (9/10)
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