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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Apr 10, 2016 |
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Great story, please finish. Love knowing it's a mostly true story. Needs improved spelling though. Ask one of the editors for help. With corrected spelling and a little tweaking, this could rise up to a 10/10. Thumbs up! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
steph2004ster
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Jun 23, 2012 |
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the action is volcanic
the spelling is not
please you spell check...or enlist me to help, wink (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jkim
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Mar 24, 2012 |
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Sooooo stoked that you have come back to this story. i am constantly wet as i read and have had several cums in the past and with the new chapter. please write more quickly! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Mar 13, 2012 |
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Chapter three was quite good, and the paragraphing is no longer a problem. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
monstermarky
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Oct 18, 2008 |
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i agree with Lady and slut. When will chapter 3 arrive Robert? (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 12, 2008 |
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great so far (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 10, 2008 |
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I thought this would be a good story, but it just wasn't to me. The paragraphs are too big, your dialogue is not broken out. It just came off as very stilted to me. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slut2002gyrl
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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yummmmi is correct...looking forward to the next chapter! (9/10)
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Lady_Megami
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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The first chapter was very yummy. Loved how she was trapped, and then later wanted it. Hope to read more of this story soon. (9/10)
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