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Taking Advantage Of A Betrayed Lover Author: ElementsOfLife
(Added on Nov 2, 2008) (This month 35561 readers) (Total 64687 readers)
Emma was shocked to her lover Sarah with another Woman. Using the help of her new Mistress she captures Sarah.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: Martiniman (Edit) Rating: Jan 11, 2012
An excellent story! Only wish there were one more closing chapter. (10/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 6, 2012
Some run-on sentences and unnecessary vagueness in combination with a certain clumsiness in the writing make that "Taking Advantage..." doesn't come across as erotic as it could have, just because of the aformentioned hampering the reader's mind from getting in the right mood.
The story is great though, with some vivid imagination on display.
Such a pity that the story is all over the place thanks to continuity problems and lots of blanks in-between happenings.
Still a nice read, but lots of room for improvement.
JJ (8/10)

Reviewer: ThFH (Edit) Rating: Apr 29, 2011
I like this story in a way very much like staceys job. I like the human christmas tree and the way jess keeps her slaves. I hope you will write a new part very soon (9/10)

Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: May 10, 2010
Good characterization and plenty going on, so a good story. My only complaint is about Little Lou, captured and ringed in a week now keeping a, to her, unknown women on the edge of orgasm for two hours, would she be able to?
I hope we learn more of what happened over Christmas, especially Christmas day. (10/10)

Reviewer: AndreaDawne (Edit) Rating: Nov 8, 2008
Its a great start in this story. Love it! I can not wait to see what's in store for Sarah and how she will react to this BDSM style. And would Emma keep her promise to Jess? I'd like to see what happens next. (9/10)

Reviewer: jkim (Edit) Rating: Nov 5, 2008
gyrl juices muchly at the start. hope it keeps going and getting hotter! (8/10)

Reviewer: dadisch (Edit) Rating: Nov 4, 2008
What a wonderful start. I look forward to the next chapter. (9/10)

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