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'Frisco
Author: J.
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(Added on Jan 19, 2002)
(This month 79331 readers) (Total 197458 readers) |
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He kidnaps her, rapes her and torments her. But when it's time to let her go..... |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kandyecaned
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May 31, 2007 |
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Very nice story. It excited me throughout...well until the needles...that made me light headed. I found myself contemplating which I would detest more...the dog or the needles...but then again...there wasn't a choice in the matter was there?
Excellent writing...just wish it was longer. (9/10)
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DAF
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Feb 4, 2007 |
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I'm not into all the pain but this was just a great story, well written and awesome imagination. Week 2 please! (9/10)
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Jaguwar
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Feb 1, 2007 |
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Wow! Nice, good action, great details (but not to much!). I doubt I'd do so well as she, however this is perfect fantasy for me. In terms of writing style, I absolutely love the way it started near the end, then went back and retold the whole story. That way we get to the meat of the biscuit (all puns intended!), get all hot and interested, then get a final explanation. Well done! (9/10)
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DESERTKAT
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Sep 25, 2006 |
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lot of action (8/10)
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zakaluka
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Jul 26, 2006 |
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Excellent story. (10/10)
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Prpackaged
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Dec 18, 2005 |
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Well worth reading. Has a feel of reality. (9/10)
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nastia2268
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Oct 11, 2005 |
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Liked all of the torture methods employed in the story. Especially the description of the caning. The victims eagerness is what made it all work for me. (9/10)
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nothing
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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Excellently written, the image of the girl lowering her ass on to the cock- gagged and drooling, while being cropped is incredible. And she enjoys it. (9/10)
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ghfkhjgv
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Jun 28, 2005 |
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I LIKED IT (9/10)
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auvi5
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May 30, 2005 |
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Once I started reading I could not stop. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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not bad (8/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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very nice (9/10)
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Lindalooking
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Dec 2, 2004 |
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J is a very good writer with several stories posted. This is another example of his flare for great pacing and wicked imagination! (9/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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Noooooo! (4/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2004)
- now that was truly insightful!Which part of the story do you feel so strongly about? And if it is something that just is not your cup-of-tea … that is what the codes are for.
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heditryst
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Jan 12, 2004 |
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excelent erotic stim!! (8/10)
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hornygirl
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Dec 24, 2003 |
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very very hot! (8/10)
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r_u_readyet
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Dec 5, 2003 |
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Very nice. Would have liked some romantic love parts in it. (7/10)
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Curtis
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Jul 12, 2003 |
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I have the opposite opinion from Stephanie -- I would have given a '10' if not for the girl deciding to stay with him at the end. Oh, and just enough dog, thank you. (9/10)
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Amber
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Jul 10, 2003 |
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Whew, my knees are still weak! Wonderful....I loved it. (10/10)
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GdRsDiamond
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May 29, 2003 |
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I love stories that capture how much a slave wants to be a slave. Thank you! (8/10)
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redEva
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Mar 3, 2003 |
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very nice - liked it all (except sucking dogie part - but well hehe) truly enjoyable read! lets see him share her maybe? now that she is there to stay ;)
(9/10)
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agp_millie
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Dec 16, 2002 |
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WoW!
i'm not into being whipped, but sat on two towels reading Your story and they were both more than damp when it reached the end.
personally, would have liked more doggy involvement (blush) and when that knot swells and he turns, dragging me .. i mean, her around the room. (9/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Nov 27, 2002 |
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Good enjoyable story. I bit too much action with the dog for my tastes though... (8/10)
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tsosie
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Aug 16, 2002 |
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Seemed to lose focus in some places but a great story overall. I thoroughly enjoyed it, the best praise I can give. Good job :) -Dan (8/10)
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rickirie
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Aug 9, 2002 |
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well written with some good feeling put into it (8/10)
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CarlitosHo
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May 25, 2002 |
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All except the dog part -- otherwise well written. Good ending. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie
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Mar 3, 2002 |
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Very nice, especially because she liked it as well... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
cps1
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Feb 13, 2002 |
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a very extreme story. I loved it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
secretworld
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Jan 24, 2002 |
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Really hot. And because she is a true slut even at the beginning (by having her nipples and clit pierced) it's almost believable. Almost. (9/10)
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