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My first time
Author: violent fantasies
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(Added on Nov 22, 2008)
(This month 52248 readers) (Total 70955 readers) |
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Everyone has their beginning and this was mine |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
prey4me
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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For those of us who like the very rough treatment of pretty, sweet, innocent girls, "Violent Fantasies" is a treat. His story isn't long, but he sets his scenario up quickly and and adequately, and gets right to the action: raping and abusing a pretty young teen. Sometimes it's nice to enjoy more character development and the like, but the quick and simple rape (and subsequent abuse) of a girl is really what it's all about!
Further, his grammar, spelling, and diction are correct. At least there's no distraction from bad writing!
I'm checking out the rest of his stories. I hope to see more submissions. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Nov 29, 2008 |
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Too brief, pace was too rapid, so there was no build up of tension.
Shows promise. (4/10)
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Curtis
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Nov 27, 2008 |
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Didn't ericca read the story codes? Extreme, violent, nc, snuff… it's all here, just as advertised. My problems with it were that it was too short and too clinical, but this story has every right to be here. 'Banned out of the Library'? I don't think so/ (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
ericca
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Nov 26, 2008 |
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disguesting (well written but the subject and the toughts !!!) This has nothing to do with BDSM and belongs to a rape fantasy board. It should be banned out of the BDSMlibrary. (1/10)
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