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The Cabin
Author: Nathanial Bosch
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(Added on Nov 23, 2008)
(This month 12218 readers) (Total 28220 readers) |
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Tired of having to put their D/s relationship on hold to go about their daily grind, Victor takes his slave to the his family's quaint, isolated mountain cabin to train her to submit properly. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
sulkon
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May 23, 2012 |
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I agree about a bit too many details, also text formatting makes it harder to read, but apart from that it's a really good, highly arousing story. I enjoyed it much even though I normally prefer more violent plot.
The story codes aren't correct – I'd definitely remove 'extreme' and 'serious' tags, perhaps 'hardcore' as well. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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Some stories lack detail, this has too much. Who cares about the minute coming and going of the guys who deliver the crate? Right, nobody.
We all know that to start a car, you need to put the key in the ignition and twist the former...
I mean, there's too much spelling-out to my taste.
The story itself is fairly written, tho I find the characters a tad thin and the plot too easy-going without having an eye to the pitfalls one could befall when tempting an adventure as you describe here. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mypainforyourpleasur
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Nov 27, 2008 |
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Terrific story; I really enjoyed it! I would like to meet the fictional "dom" in real life!! - michelle (10/10)
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