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Humping
Author: Jona
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(Added on Jan 18, 2009)
(This month 14051 readers) (Total 19930 readers) |
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Master humiliates his horny Sub by letting her get herself off on his foot like a bitch in heat |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Stranger1
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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Just a tired old scene, done poorly. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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I like the idea, even have written an unposted short about it (just under 5000 words). What I have done is put more emphasis on the surroundings. In my short it is a public display, amongst peers, unbeknownst to the woman who is put on display.
The short was inspired by a scene in the 1997 Jeremy Irons/Dominique Swain remake of "Lolita", where swain crawls rather lovely around the floor of an upscale pub.
Anyway, I enjoyed your take.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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very nice original idea for a story (8/10)
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