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Masters slave
Author: humbleslave
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
(This month 70243 readers) (Total 83511 readers) |
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A power beoynd my own will made me kneel before my Master. my vanilla hetero life was now over. for the rest of my life i would serve, serve as a worthless faggot slave |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
stphnrogers
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Feb 21, 2009 |
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Good idea but jumped ahead too soon. I think the author (humbleslave) could improve it but maybe his Master only allowed him a short time to communicate his story. (Could be, you never know)
I'd like to read more about this slaves journey into slavery and the torments that he endored.
Give us more humbleslave.
Needs to get spellcheck working and few grammer errors (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
scanlon42
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Very good job and interesting approach. I think you just need to take your time a little more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sissymaid
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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good story idea but i found it was to fast.as a straight sub wannabe slave myself i have from time to time spoke to masters for fun and i know that i would never jump on a plane to go meet a male master after one email.plus wouldnt be getting on my knees and stripping off to get in his boot. most likely would never meet one because am straight and the idea of serving as slave to male is very erotic idea only.
once again though great story idea and would love to read more. ideally read from begining again but have the story go at a much slower pace. (5/10)
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