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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
handcrank
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Sep 19, 2014 |
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I read this story when it first appeared, and loved it. It has since given me an appreciation for punishment bras! I was amazed at how this woman progressed in her love for tacks in her underwear and discipline! I would love to see a follow up, or more chapters with escapades with the original players! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 23, 2010 |
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I liked the ending, which I didn't see coming, but really should have. Once again your eye for detail shows here. I especially liked the mini-lecture on how to build a better OS. And the relationship between the narrator and the protagonist was perfect. You achieved just the right balance between naivete and intelligence for him. I had a difficult time deciding between '9' and '10' for this one, since I felt some sort of lack here. I finally went up because I couldn't put my finger on what was missing. It might've been simply that this was one of your shortest stories, but brevity is no excuse for a lowered mark as long as all the bases are covered, so there it is. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ashley_craves_cruel
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Jun 5, 2010 |
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No, Suzi isn't the only twisted woman in the world. You describe her so well, her motives, the punishments the devises and realizes. I must tell you, this is reality based. Except you may not personally know it. Thank you for psychoanalyzing me. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ericca
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May 3, 2010 |
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well written and after an exciting story an unespected and most original end (who asks for a sequel) (10/10)
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