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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Jun 11, 2010 |
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This is a great story. Ty M Goode (terrible nom de plume, btw) combines a usually sharp sense of story with a lovely ability to graphically imagine and describe extreme bondage that makes for fun reading.
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I've reviewed this story before, but after the server fuckup of December and with the new chapters recently, it's time for a new look. I have only two negative notations for this story, but unfortunately one is severe enough to prevent me giving the story the 10 score it would otherwise roundly deserve. It's got to do with the warning I gave when I first reviewed the story; there are so many characters here that with Ty's tendencies to (a) not update very often, or with very much material and (b) skip from one character to another, the story's starting to get lost. The author needs to either concentrate on one interaction at a time, or put several victims and "masters/mistresses" together rather than skip from one to another so often.
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The second "sour point," if you want to call it that, is a minor one, but since I know Ty sells his work on A1 Adult Ebooks, it's one that he should be aware of and correct, if only for the sake of professionalism. One does not "change tact." Tact is skill in dealing with difficult or delicate social situations, and does not change. One either "changes tactics" or "changes tack," a sailing term denoting a specific type of direction change that has entered the common vernacular. In any case, I've enjoyed this story immensely and look forward to further chapters. Soon, please. ;) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 10, 2010 |
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Another one I reviewed, but got virginified after the server went arse over tit, last December.
"Under Evaluation" is a very well conceived story. Crude and hard, yes, but not without showing signs of some clear insights into what goes on in people's grey matter.
Add some vivid, highly erotic fiddlings to an intricate plot and you've got some excellent reading material.
Great!
JJ
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobbond
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May 28, 2010 |
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Great story, beatifully described scenes of bondage. (10/10)
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CrazedDog
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Mar 2, 2010 |
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Looking forward to the next installment (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Jan 10, 2010 |
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This is an awesome start. I love this story and Goode is a very talented writer. He can make me "see" what he is writing about. If/when this story is developed and finished it is will easily rate a solid 10. (8/10)
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