|
|
|
|
|
Blackmailing Jill
Author: DML
|
| |
(Added on Mar 2, 2002)
(This month 95034 readers) (Total 168864 readers) |
| |
This story is about Jill who works as her bosses book keeper and it is only after sometime that her boss figures out that Jill has also been happening herself to his checkbook. She is told she can do as she is told or go to jail and the blackmailing begins. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 6 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
17% |
17% |
0% |
0% |
17% |
17% |
33% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (4/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
weaseltooth
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 6, 2004 |
| |
very hot,had me convinced! (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Curtis
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 12, 2004 |
| |
I only made it as far as the taped confession. basically your blackmail victim is stupid. Where I live, anything under $100,000 embezzled only gets you a suspended sentence and restitution. Up to $200,000 just gets you six months of weekend detention, or maybe home confinement. The story developed slowly enough that I had too much time to dwell on the unreality of it, so I bailed. (5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 11, 2004 |
| |
my type of story, YESSSSSSS!!!!! (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
grumpywoman
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 19, 2003 |
| |
Sure, it is a familiar scenario but that is because it works. Thanks for a good read. More please! (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
overeazy
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 8, 2002 |
| |
Overall I thought the writting to be very good and was easy to follow and contray to what some may think I found some of the things so far very original to what I have seen in other similar stories on the same theme. Shows good potential in future chapters and look forward to them (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
hyphen666
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 6, 2002 |
| |
How original can you get? Let's see now, an embezzler caught in the act, a well built one at that. Naturally she has to become the slave of the other cardboard cutout character. I'm really impressed by the use of the dog collar; how very original. Now I discover that the author intends to further abuse my senses with even more of his stilted prose, and to really make it painful on the reader there will be no fun stuff done to the victim. Guess what? I'm out of here! (4/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
overeazy
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2002)
- I just love how some people can be so critical of the work of others and yet they have no work of their own to showcase. You want to write about how original someones work is and yet you most likly never had an original thought in your life. Maybe your idea of "fun stuff" might be shitting on the victims face and beating them but maybe your idea of "fun stuff" does not appeal to the majority.
|
|
|
About 