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Royal Bloodline
Author: Mark6670
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(Added on Apr 27, 2010)
(This month 65533 readers) (Total 82603 readers) |
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A 20 year old male of royal descent is forced to serve a female warrior, an adversary of his mother. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
cbtboyuk
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May 17, 2010 |
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Lovely stuff. Am very much enjoying the immediacy with which you conjure a whole Femdom world and would love to read much, much more - thank you. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rufustcat
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May 17, 2010 |
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great start, thanks
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| Reviewer:
topsfrombottom
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May 3, 2010 |
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Outstanding start. Do continue! Excellent. In fact, I'd have given you a score of nine, except it ended far too soon. I was JUST sinking into it when, suddenly... it was done.
As I am VERY fond of the genre you've chosen (that of State-sponsored FemDom and am also impressed with your style, any upcoming efforts from you will likely get (at least) a nine from me, providing it is (1) as engaging and well-composed as this premiere was and is (2) around half-again as long.
Have fun and please hurry with more instalments - your writing shows intense promise. I have written professionally and hereby also offer my assistance in any way I am able to - i.e. proofing, etc. Let me know if interested, but otherwise, back at it - you rock.
tfb.. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jedisubmits
(Edit) (May 6, 2010)
- Thanks TFB. I would like to hear more from you because you have written professionally. This is just a quick short story, but I am writing a much more lengthy story and would like your input. I have submitted the final two chapters to be published on this site. Let me know what you think.
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