advanced search

List Stories

Newest Stories
Highest Rated
Most Voted
The Longest
Recent Pop
Overall Pop
List by Title
List by Author

More ...

Survival Author: TheSouthernLady
(Added on Apr 27, 2010) (This month 51007 readers) (Total 66297 readers)
Kidnapped,Beaten,Raped.in a town where no one cares come see if getting out is an option.

Ratings and Reviews:
Number of Ratings: 6
3 Votes
3 Votes
3 Votes
3 Votes
3 Votes
3 Votes
3 Votes
3 Votes 1 Vote 1 Vote 1 Vote
3 Votes 1 Vote 1 Vote 1 Vote
3 Votes 1 Vote 1 Vote 1 Vote
3 Votes 1 Vote 1 Vote 1 Vote
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
50% 17% 0% 0% 17% 0% 0% 0% 0% 17%
Weighed Average (?): (4/10)
Average Rating: (3.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

Review this story: Rate It! and add review for this story
Only user can review stories


Seems you are not login.
Go to the forums to login!

then refresh/reload this page

Want to register? It's free!
Forgotten your password?


Reviewer: Tavy (Edit) Rating: Nov 18, 2011
Unable to get more than a quarter of use way through as practicably unreadable (1/10)

Reviewer: fantazmaster (Edit) Rating: May 8, 2010
I like the basic ideas in this story,but have to concur with the other reviewers on the diction issues.Also the author may want to consider writing in third person vs the first person perspective predominant throughout this story. (5/10)

Reviewer: csr (Edit) Rating: May 3, 2010
I'm sorry, although it looked promising I could not finish it. There are many people who would gladly edit for you if English is new to you. I understand it is hard to write creatively in another language and applaud you for trying, however please use the services of an editor to let your imagination shine through. (1/10)

Reviewer: TheSouthernLady (Edit) Rating: Apr 30, 2010
OK guys I'm looking back over it. re-reading it for the umpteenth time. i have had quite a few people look over it. (10/10)
Replied by: csr (Edit) (May 3, 2010)
I see you liked it. ;-)

Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: Apr 30, 2010
I am sorry I have to agree with Michael247, but I did not even get half way through before giving up. (1/10)

Reviewer: Michael247 (Edit) Rating: Apr 28, 2010
I tried. I really did. But I was only able to get half-way through your story. I spent the majority of my time trying to figure out what you MEANT to say, rather than what you did say. If English is not your primary language, please find an editor who can help you through the difficulties. *** I can't even begin to comment on the plot, sexual tension, arc, or climax because I was so distracted by the wrong words and misspellings. *** The only other thing I can caution you on is to watch tense. Some of your paragraphs are in present tense, and some are in past tense. Pick one, preferably PAST TENSE. Even accomplished writers have trouble with present tense. Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (2/10)

BDSM for All
Free sex stories

(This Month)