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Bless Me Father, for I Have Sinned
Author: Ashley Zacharias
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(Added on Apr 27, 2010)
(This month 68232 readers) (Total 87820 readers) |
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A woman tells her priest that she wants to serve a more rigorous penance than the church recommends. He learns to like the idea. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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handcrank
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Sep 19, 2014 |
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A bit long, but I couldn't stop until I had finished. The leotard was the best part....I have often thought of making a bra like that for my wife.... with a size smaller on the outside, just to put some pressure in the right places. Great Story! (9/10)
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ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Mar 30, 2011 |
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AVOID THIS ARTHUR LIKE YOU AVOID THE BUBONIC PLAGUE! SHE IS SHIT! DO NOT READ! ITS TOTAL SHIT! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
delish
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2011)
- Ashley Zacharias is one of my favorite authors on the site. Her prose is clear and largely error-free, and she knows how to weave a good story. Nobody should be fooled by this lone reviewer's claims.
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bracemaiden
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May 20, 2010 |
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Interesting use of religion in an erotic context! The storyline is good, as is the descriptions and limits. Well done! (9/10)
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Losalt
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May 2, 2010 |
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Originality 9,5/10
Spelling 10/10 (I think, I'm not an expert on the english language but I didn't notice anything at least..)
Sadism level.. well I guess I'll go for 6/10 but it's subjective so you might not agree.. ;-)
Topicality or how contemporary it is 10/10 (it refers directly to some of the events in the news lately)
General quality of the story 9.5/10
Value of the story in a nonsexual way 9/10
Domination and submission.. 8/10
Some people like switching some don't and I guess some people don't mind topping from the bottom but I for one think that the psychological enjoyment of that particular aspect of this story isn't up there among the best stories out there.
The story do actually have something more to it then just allowing you to experience bliss for a few moments although it can achieve that too.
And you don't know for sure where it'll end in the first line like some stories.
It is not the best work of Ashley Zacharias but just like so often before she have a new story that I for one won't forget anytime soon
And I reckon it will be in the list of the better stories in here/minor favorite stories for many on this website for a long time to come.
As for the building of tension and so one..
Well Michael247 said it all really..
And I agree with him.
The story could be a little more believable although the places that isn't don't stand out to ruin the story.
I would recommend more or less everyone to read the story, if not for anything else then just to learn how it's written for this is quality although she's done better in the past in my view. (9/10)
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handy chuck
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Apr 30, 2010 |
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A well written story. Most interesting. Clever twist at the end. One could even say topical considering some of the developments in recent years for the Catholic Church. But I get the impression I have read this story or something like it some years ago. (10/10)
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TzA
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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Another excellent story by Ashley Zacharias!
It is always a pleasure to read a new story from you, and I really like the church setting (10/10)
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Michael247
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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In college many years ago I was taking a creative writing course and our instructor asked us to write a single sentence that created two characters, set the scene, and even began a plot. His example? "Father, forgive me for I have sinned." And that's exactly how this story started out. As a non-practicing Catholic I've always been intrigued by stories of this nature. I never had an unwholesome or immoral experience with any of my parish priests, and mostly remember them as men of faith who generally cared about others. That said I found Father Ignatius' response to Mary White's request to be a little off kilter, despite the fact that I LIKED his response. When you add in the fact that it's highly unlikely his original name was Ignatius, I kept expecting the story to reveal him as a Jesuit, and thus he would have been much more aware of some of the darker histories of the Church. It's not really a complaint, just something I thought I needed to mention. Father Ignatius just seemed too willing to allow the women to run things. *** I especially got suspicious when the second woman, Maria whatever showed up and asked for physical punishment. At first I got a little irritated that a similar name as the first character was being used. This can cause character confusion, but the author did an excellent job keeping the various Marys separate. By the time Marilyn rolled around I was deeply suspicious of what was going on. I'm surprised the priest didn't sense it. I guess he was thinking with his dick and not his brain. He was lucky it turned out to be something even weirder than I could imagine. *** This story built up the sexual tension perfectly and had all the other elements of a well-written tale. It had plot, climax, resolution, and character growth. Grammar was good and so was sentence structure. *** I guess my only beef is with the believability factor. I mean really...three women all named with some various version of "Mary" decided to form or join a special organization of depraved women who want to satisfy celibate priests to keep priests from buggering their kids? Huh? What if Josephine wants to join? Does she have to get a name change? And I fail to see how butt fucking doesn't violate that whole adultery thing. I tell you if I was the husband and found out my local parish priest was buggering my wife I'd be out for blood. Or at least wondering why I wasn't getting some too. Hey wait...if I only screw my secretary in the ass, does that mean I'm not committing adultery?
***In summary I really enjoyed this story. It gave me everything I wanted, including satisfaction ;). Well told. Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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I always save an Ashley Zacharias story for when I'm feeling down from weeding through umpteen uploads which a lot of the time contain text that make me want to be someplace else. A place where things like syntax and grammar are a natural given and where feelings and emotions and decent storytelling are transferred to paper like it's second nature.
Ashley Zacharias lives in such a place. And boy & girl, am I glad she does...
Thanks once more for a great contribution, Ash.
JJ (10/10)
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Abe
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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A literary treat, cleverly written. (9/10)
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Millie
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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I really enjoyed this story and found it entertaining and fresh.
Thank you.
(8/10)
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