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Misty
Author: Kitty Cumm
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(Added on Jun 7, 2010)
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Can the love between a pretty patient and her aneastheologist be real? |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Like Jimmy, I'm a little astonished by this tale. It wasn't erotica actually, since there was only one sentence that was even remotely sexual in nature, so I kind wonder why it was posted here at the BDSM Library. I can only assume that this story is meant to be a serial, in which case it's off to a pretty good start. I'm not a fan of serials because so many authors forget that even serials need plot movement. In this particular case, I can see movement, but also an over reaching plot arc if the author continues the story.
*** Grammar and sentence construction were really good and I can't help feeling that the reason I'm rating this story as a seven was because it wasn't very erotic. In any case, the author demonstrates some pretty good writing skills which makes me wish I WAS reading erotica, by Eleanor von Korff.
*** I was also impressed by the realism in the story. Either the author did their research or they are involved in the medical profession and knew what the hell they were talking about. It added some nice depth and realism to the story that I enjoyed.
*** I am a bit confused about the synopsis provided especially in comparison with the story. I didn't get any romantic feelings from the relationship, so am a bit confused how the synopsis describes what's going on... unless of course this IS a serial story and the romance is on its way.
*** Lastly, I can't help expressing my concern for Misty. As a parent of three daughters, and a man who loves his wife beyond reason, I can't help but allow a tiny portion of my emotions to get the better of me during a story like this. I WANT to see Misty pull through. Save her? Please?
Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2010 |
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First time around I thought someone had been chewing on the wrong kind of mushrooms. However, that must have been to having one eye on the story and the other on the World Cup Football (Argentina v/s Nigeria), because, after the second read I was sure about the mushrooms. But not the wrong kind.
because, although 'Misty' is, well, mistifying, it is also well-written (bar the odd silly spelling mistake) and rather intriguing.
Enough so to create an expactation and has yours truly interested enough to keep an eye on this tale.
JJ (7/10)
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