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Happy Holiday - the 4th
Author: bigbobby.
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(Added on Jun 27, 2010)
(This month 85708 readers) (Total 97408 readers) |
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Long time friends need a change for their fourth celebrations. A fun trip out on Lake Superior. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Eric Boss
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Jun 11, 2016 |
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a fucking hot, horny, filthy, woman-hating story, I loved every loathsome image, and the progression of violence and the guys indifference was what kept this reader stroking. Cheers and thanks for a satisfying wank. Eric.
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JimmyJump
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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I somehow expected hick-ups between paragraphs, accompanied by a distinct smell of alcohol-on-breath, because that's what "Happy Holiday" 'feels' like: something that was written while not quite sober.
A good idea gone to waste thanks to the awkward way of writing. It's nice to see some fluency in sentences, but they do not become more fluent by leaving half the words out.
Too bad. Story had promise. bigbobby also. But he'd better start polishing-up his syntax and dialogue. Soon.
JJ (5/10)
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