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The Drop Author: Ryan
(Added on Oct 12, 2010) (This month 27804 readers) (Total 33637 readers)
A tale, in two parts, unless you want more (or less) of the snuff killing of a young man in front of an audience, following a period of incarceration and prep.

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Reviewer: cbtboyuk (Edit) Rating: Dec 23, 2010
I've been meaning to review this story for some time, my apologies.
This is an extraordinary piece of writing - dark, complex, immensely intelligent, beautifully structured, terrifying and utterly horny. I felt entirely immersed in this terrifying world. The voice and character of the narrator were exquisitely realised, and I adore the rich hints of back story.
Very few stories on this site are imagined executed and written to this standard. The subject matter is, of course, very dark, which might explain why there are not more reviews.
If this is the kind of story you are writing, I really think you should consider publishing, in magazines like Instigator, or even possibly in a book of erotic short stories. I have certainly paid good money for fiction of a far lower standard. (As a side note, the "dominic" story, which certainly has the potential to be of this standard, really needs finishing.)
Thank you. Please keep writing. (10/10)

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