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Mira
Author: James Winter
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(Added on Dec 1, 2010)
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Mira has done something very bad to the person she cares about most, but she has a plan to make amends and is determined to go through with it. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MarginallyTruePig
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Jan 2, 2011 |
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A nice, short vignette. While I do not mind and sometimes enjoy that not everything is fully explained, I feel that such an extreme operation deserves some more background (a few more hints, really) to feel better justified. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Dec 5, 2010 |
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Some more characterization and the background that led to such an extreme action would have made this a better story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 4, 2010 |
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You know, there's a Eunuch Stories archive that would give this story more love. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 3, 2010 |
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Some people write like most men fuck: having an orgasm in the fourth sentence is seriously throwing the reader into the wetness of the action --and I hope not an indication of the author's tempo as to his private humpings.
"Mira", besides taking off like a V-Max on ethanol, is finished before you can get comfy in yer chair. Not that the story is rushed. It's just, well, short.
The word 'story' is in fact a slight exaggeration. "Mira" is an excerpt from a bigger picture, a culmination, so to speak, of the result of an elaborate relationship between three people.
As such, it is a pity that this whole relationship wasn't put to paper.
This being said, "Mira" is a nice read. Well written too. Not enough character development and a tad short on eroticism, but a nice read still.
JJ (7/10)
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