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Bound in Nottingham
Author: cbt42
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(Added on Dec 2, 2010)
(This month 54942 readers) (Total 62151 readers) |
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A days fantasy play in Nottingham |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
austerud
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Dec 12, 2010 |
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I enjoyed your story and hope that you continue it. Your use of short, and sometimes fragmentary, sentences gives the narrative a somewhat emotional, conversational tone that I like. I'd suggest running it through a spell-checker and maybe being a little more descriptive in how things feel, taste, etc. Keep going! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 9, 2010 |
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Judging by the score of my three predecessors, I wonder if they're socks from the author... because "Bound In Nottingham" --while it has potential-- is a heap of spelling errors, syntax rape and lacking punctuation marks.
Also, it has what seems to be cbt42's trademark style of short, abrupt sentences, which come across as if everything was written down in a hurry between fits of the hic-up.
Like I said, the subject has promise, but is in need of a better treatment.
JJ (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Geilt
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Dec 5, 2010 |
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great story, keep it coming and do tell what happened next! yum! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
shabre
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Dec 4, 2010 |
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awesome story xx girl (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
john0850
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Dec 3, 2010 |
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Please continue this good story. (10/10)
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