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Extreme Slavery
Author: Micky
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(Added on Jan 8, 2011)
(This month 134821 readers) (Total 165681 readers) |
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Extremely cruel Tenant lady enslaves son of land lord....real story....will take months to complete..as the slavery is still on...... |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
hb59
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May 17, 2011 |
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Enjoyable story. I was left with a feeling of expectencee. Would care to read next part very much. (7/10)
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Luppiespy
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Jan 18, 2011 |
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Good stories (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
cblade
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Jan 14, 2011 |
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Well I would not call it poor- considering that the author's mother tongue isn't English. The very essence of the story is pretty interesting, such as the tenant being the dominant one instead of the landlady. The tortures ARE dangerous, but there ARE stories involving snuff published in this site, this one at least guarantees the survival of the submissive. The story telling could be more well flown, that I agree, but I would say this is a good story, with further attempts, can be very interesting, considering the geographic setup of the story. I don't recall many Indian femdom stories anyway, I would encourage the writer to continue writing. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jan 10, 2011 |
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Quite a poor effort for a first attempt.
On first reading I thought it had promise but the typos and lack of speech marks "quotation marks" as the Engish call them and lack of explanation as to who is talking spolied it, but on further reading, I feel it is not only not erotic, stomach turning in fact, but dangerous as the torture described as mild torture is probably enough to kill, sealing an ass hole with hot wax, burning the glans penis, I really hope the story improves, maybe re writing this part one should be the priority rather than writing further chapters. (3/10)
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