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House Party
Author: Darinost
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(Added on May 7, 2011)
(This month 104370 readers) (Total 120729 readers) |
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David recounts a weekend spent abusing a woman in her own home. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
sulkon
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Apr 12, 2012 |
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Very good read, though I think that the plot twists - Michelle joining the party and Linda playing along - were a bit too obvious. (8/10)
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Riptide
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Oct 16, 2011 |
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Good. (6/10)
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SamCurious
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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good but vicious - makes me shudder at what else is in your depraved mind!! (8/10)
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H Dean
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May 14, 2011 |
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I must say that this is a well written story, though something appears to be missing; that hidden element that makes a story really pop.
In this case the thing missing is the study in humiliation and suffering that should have accompanied the scenarios and the relative ease of the taking. The odd sister scene also was rather odd - too easy where it should have taken more. (8/10)
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fellatrix
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May 11, 2011 |
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Really good. Well-written. The developments as the story progresses keep it interesting. Some of the brutality is a little much but it doesn't go all the way to the extremes, and most of it was fun to read. Nice work :) (9/10)
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Snark
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May 10, 2011 |
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Well Done! Well written, proofed and edited. Imaginative progressions and scenes. Totally unbelievable...but who cares! This type of story doesn't force a suspension of disbelief as much as it ignores it altogether. Entertaining diversion...and perversion. Now...what happens the following weekend? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Darinost
(Edit) (May 11, 2011)
- Thank you for the kind words! You're right, the story isn't exactly realistic. Like everything I write in this genre, it's essentially just a mindless sex romp. But hey, what's wrong with a little romping? :)
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