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Open Victory Celebration
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Apr 29, 2002)
(This month 92140 readers) (Total 143831 readers) |
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Sexual satire of two sisters that are currently stars of women's professional tennis. Part One describes their celebration after having won the US Open in NYC. They abduct a young couple arriving by Greyhound from Georgia. The couple is kidnapped for a long evening of sexual play. The next part focuses on the sister's approach to resolving problems with the Executive Director of the Women's Tennis Association. |
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mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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I liked the concept, not so much the story
You are still noe of theb est writers on the Web, but as i have said before even GREAT movies directors tend every now and then to have a movie that does not do a killer job (6/10)
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errol42
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Apr 30, 2004 |
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Stupid and amateurish (4/10)
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- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (May 1, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to read and review Open Victory Celebration.
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpkr
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Jan 17, 2004 |
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I liked the force air intake of farting followed by the strap on dildo in the ass.
the description of pulling her sphicheter apart means the dildo is wide and hard to take.
Look forward to alot more description in the actual ass fucking of the girl. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Dec 29, 2003 |
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It's only fair that since I was the one who originally reviewed this,I give it another shot. Unfortunately this still suffers in comparison to your other works. The dialogue still doesn't ring true, and there is way too much detail, including the technical jargon, than is warranted. By the way Martina is Czech and you misspelled her last name. On the plus side you have certainly set the table for whatever your fertile imagination will present. For that reason only, I will await, with some eagerness, for the next installment. I also realize that it is grossly unjust to compare your effort to what you, and only you, seem to be able to generate these days. For that reason my revised rating is slightly higher, and could go higher still if you did something about this ersatz-black dialogue your main characters are using. (6/10)
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hyphen666
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Apr 30, 2002 |
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Compared to the author's first two postings, this is average at best. (5/10)
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