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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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nothing spectacular, was worth the time to read, it but found nothing that real heathed up the story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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I don't enjoy first person writing styles very much. I also hate the capitalization of the 'h' in he. A couple things. It appears the author also has difficulties with 1st person writing: "I ask, "what is in it Master?" You tell me "I will find out soon<br>enough."" Another error: "squeeze in me the ..." This story might have been rated higher by me, had it not been for a bad writing style such as this.<br>Also, I don't believe it is possible to control and instantly release orgasms in real life. Therefore, the thing about counting to 5 before orgasming is rather disbelievable. Other than that, it's an OK story. (6/10)
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