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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
switchy76
(Edit) |
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Jan 11, 2012 |
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look forward to read the next parts. love this type of story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 10, 2012 |
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Must agree with himannv about not getting a feel for the characters.
The reason for this is because the writing is too disconnected, in that there's only descriptions without dialogue -and even descriptions of dialogue.
This makes for a detachment -a disconnection- just like when reading a report someone wrote on this or that event. It gives you an idea of what happened, but the reader doesn't feel involved thanks to the writing style.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
himannv
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Jan 9, 2012 |
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Interesting start and hope that you add in some more. I generally prefer stories which are a bit more drawn out and this one was all action so I couldn't get enough of a feel for the characters. Keep writing. (7/10)
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