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Bound To Her Forever
Author: Stepping Down
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(Added on Jan 29, 2012)
(This month 16135 readers) (Total 29849 readers) |
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A young women wakes up with no memory of her past. She finds her self at the mercy of two women, that draw her into their dark and strange world. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 30, 2012 |
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Needs quite a bit of editing for grammar. And the sewn up vagina will kill her soon from the infections. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2012 |
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While very well written, there's at the same time some excruciating spelling/grammar errors in "Bound To Her Forever".
Another slightly negative point is that the story is rushed -although it often doesn't feel that way because of being so well written. But nevertheless, the "turning" of our amnesiac main character goes way too fast.
Still, despite its flaws, the story is great, the characterizations chillingly accurate, so that everything flows in an agreeable way.
Stepping Down has stepped up to the challenge of writing and has left a pretty solid impression.
I hope there's more where "Bound To Her Forever" came from.
JJ (9/10)
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