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Sharon's Year
Author: vynter
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(Added on Mar 25, 2012)
(This month 58345 readers) (Total 71238 readers) |
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The secretary of a powerful lawyer is caught embezzling money, and pays the price with a year of chastity. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Stephen Miletus
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Apr 22, 2012 |
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I agree with Kemosabe: this piece was too short to give an honest opinion about. Just at the point I was about to decide whether or not I liked it -- the story was over. I was left wondering just how she started every morning being shaved by her boss, & how chastity was enforced on her, & how it changed her life. (Besides not getting laid, of course.)
Other than that, no glaring misspellings or grammatical errors, no improbable plot elements to break the mood of the tale. That alone puts this story in the top 50%.
When you add more to this, I'll be happy to revise what I've written. (6/10)
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kemosabe
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Mar 29, 2012 |
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Too short to really evaluate but the writing is good, punctuation excellent and has promise. Looking forward to next instalment (hope it is a bit longer) (5/10)
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